By Vurdlak on April 6, 2009, with 115 Comments
As one sees the beautiful rose climbing the window ledge on a typical neighborhood house, he thinks to himself. “What a romantic scene“. Suddenly, a horrific strange noise breaks the silence, and the observer quickly understands that the noise is coming from inside the house. What did just happen? Until now, he wasn’t even aware that he was the only one in the neighborhood, standing in front of the house. Why did everyone avoid this part of the neighborhood? Just as he was about to turn his back to the house, someone pulled him from behind whispering: “bad things happen to the nosy observers“, and then he felt a strong hit landing at the back of his head. As he was about to loose consciousness, last thing he noticed was a horrific detail that made the scene not so idle anymore. Can you continue this story? What did the observer last notice, that scared the living hell out of him?







(34 votes)
There is no man with the mustache. That’s bull**it. Stop spending your time people!
the guy wearing a monocall!!!!
I dont see the mustache guy but i see the face in the rose.
for those who cant see the rose face its near the top, slightly angled and the big dark section is the mouth. you should be able to figure it out from there :D
is the mousthache guy actually part of the optical illusion beacause it isn’t scary?!
well, ill be sure to look for flowers that are around before i go snooping X)
i see the face yay!!
where is he
the leaf that looks more like lips between the legs are lips and the legs are the chin at the end of the leg on the top there is a leaf which is the eye underneath it there are three leaves the middle one is the other eye the twig\stick in between the eyes and lips is the nose Yay!! (if you do not know where the legs are look at the other comments,the flowers body is the darker sticks and stem
when he woke he thought he was the right way up vbut he saw only sideways on, he tryed to look around but he could only move his eyes. he rolled his eyes upward and it dawned on him, he was now part of the rose…
The rose is evil
Am i the only one that has noticed that two stems just underneith the rose going up have claw like hands?
nope
One slowly regained his senses, aware first of the throbbing goose-egg on his head. Slowly, One horrifically realized how he’d overused the adjective “horrific.”
“That must have been it,” he thought. “Bad writing makes some people crazy. I’ve been abducted by a person who’s read enough Engrish penned by native speakers, and they’ve simply gone over the edge.”
Disoriented, One slowly became aware that he was laying prone on a hard surface. His first instinct, to shake his fist at the Grammatical Gods who had brought his pathetic character to brief literary life, was defeated abruptly when his limbs refused to move. With difficulty, he turned his aching head to find his left hand and arm tied firmly down to the heavy wooden table at his back. His body was immobilized.
One returned his gaze to the ceiling, wincing at the pain in his head and neck. He silently cursed the pronoun confusion that had resulted in the only proper name he’d ever had.
Tears suddenly welled in his eyes, surprising him with their heat and urgency. Since his abrupt inception at the beginning of this tale, he’d only briefly appreciated the beauty of his world, before the crude interruption of present- and past-tense confusion that had rendered him unable to defend himself against the subsequent attack. Sentence after unintelligible sentence pulled his tiny life into a plotless, absurd cliche, and now here he was, without a proper name, strapped to a table in a darkened room, left to wonder at his impending fate.
His eyes eventually cleared, and he peered uncomprehending at the dully glinting steel suspended above him. The realization suddenly dawned, pulling with it a vivid memory of his sixth-grade literature class. He recognized this scene. He’d somehow been transported into a much more frightening story. The darkened room, the cruel table, the sinister sliver of steel hanging from the black ceiling, the man alone with his mind, going slowly mad against his mechanical foe…. A portrait of Poe appeared in his mind’s eye, on the cover of a short book: “The Pit and the Pendulum.”
As unseen gears moaned into motion above, urging the heavy blade into its first, slow swing, One came to two conclusions. First, no one had written anything scary for the last 150 years, and second, he was about to learn the meaning of “horrific.”
not how u use the term one!
I can finally see the man with the mustache, and he looks to me like he’s either dead or dying.
The man woke up, and struggled to sit up. The horrifing rose was gone, but the house remained. He started to stand, and then realized his mistake. The rose was coiled up next to a tree, waiting to trap the next innocent observer.
first I saw the pic, and I thought what’s the scary part? Then I read your entertaining story, and then BAM I saw the rose.
okayy i see the face in the rose and how the branches kind of make a stick-body and fingers for it, is there anything else?
well i first saw the rose with a face and then read the comments and it said there is a man with a mustache. i thought they were lying but i turned my laptop 90 deg and i saw the man with the mustache. coooooooolllllll :)
I only see the face on the rose ,but I feel like I`m missing something pretty important.
it scares the livin hell outa me!!! i dont like the rose:-(
Floor Boards squeaked, doors that needed oiling and stairs that were unsafe to balance a pencil on. Just by looking at this hollow, soulless, empty building,I call it building because it’s too depressing to call home. Home is somewhere that you can run to when your fears take over your body, this ‘building’ WAS my fears. At night you hear the whispers of dreams that never were. Cry’s of children who never lived and laughter of ghosts who never died. This was my nightmare.
Okay, turn your chin until its sideways to the left. then, two leaves should be the eyes, one leaf the lips, another leaf above it that is the mustache, and thin branch that is the nose, and a big branch that makes the head. got it?
if your happy and you know it clap your hands *clap**clap*if your………..what dos this have to do with anything
Duh, the face on the rose.
yay i ginally found the mustached guy! :D
i mean finally
it’s not A mousthache guy for heavanes sake!it appears that rose has a face SO WHAT?!?!? it doesn’t have a mousthache!GAWD!!!!
well tere is actually a guy with a moustache you just have to tilt you chin 90 degrees to the left!
i tilt my head right and i see the shadow of the rose as a face… i tilt my head to the right and i see that hole n the wall as the eye and the planks making the shape of the nose and mouth. I DO NOT SEE A MOUSTACHE.
where the hell is the MOUSTACHE MAN
TURN YUR HEAD